Wednesday, 30 November 2011
My First Essay
This is my little brother.
He like cars and it's Mercedes SLR.
My name is Taha Kashif and I like karate and I like Ferrari 458 Spider.
I love doing big jobs like watering plants and cutting weeds and I work with my teacher.
I go to Laurence Heins school , I am in year 1, Rowen class
I know a man who built the school, he is Laurence Heins.
I want to be a Consultant Doctor when I grow up, then I will help old peoples like the NSPCC doctors, they help old people.
I like the animals which are fast like Sharks. There are different types of Sharks like Short fin Shark, Lemon shark, Threshor Shark, gray white shark, blue shark, basking shark, hemmer head shark, Cooke cutter shark.
Gray white Shark has cans in its tummy.
The Short fins shark are faster then every other shark.
Cars are different shapes and sizes.
Planes are faster then cars and don't fly the plane up and down and size by side because it's tail snaps off then it can crash in a house.
THE END
Labels:
ESSAY,
KIDS ACTIVITY,
KIDS ESSAY,
KIDS STUDY,
YEAR1
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
hmmmmmmmmm
ReplyDeletegood
Great taha and abdullah........
ReplyDeleteAt least he has more general knowledge than I do :):):)
ReplyDelete